The Black Wall Blog FLASH FICTION CHALLENGE #2
Word post I chose at bottom (No peaking, please) :p
It sat, way up, the hill
That house, we loved.
It looked, so peaceful, so homey
Surrounded by, VIBRANT colored,
Flower gardens,
Slate walkways
All nestled, among EVERGREENS, so tall
WHITE Birch, circled by LUSH bushes
A dream, come true
We signed, the papers
Friends gathered
We raised our glasses
to CELEBRATE!
We packed, moved in
GOD BLESS OUR HOME.
That night, AFTER dark
They arrived, DARK clouds
Winds WHIPPED, it POURED
Air CRACKLED, lightening FLASHED
Thunder SHOOK, our home.
It happened
Total DARKNESS, Power OUTAGE
Candles FOUND,
Match STRUCK
FLAME GLOWED.
We watched our trees,
They SWAYED, then BENT
Then SWAYED, some more,
Windows RATTLED, shutters BANGED
Books FELL.
And then
We HEARD, a noise
Stairs CREAKED
He whispered, “WHAT’S THAT?”,
“Shhhhhhhhh QUIET!”, I HISSED!
We FELT, a presence
We SAW, the shadow
A GLIMPSE, of steel
An AXE, blood covered!
I SCREAMED!
I SHOOK, he said,
“WAKE UP! It’s MORNING! ”
LOOKED around,
The SUN, SHONE brightly.
Kind Regards and still learning everyday – K
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Entry to Flash Fiction Challenge #2
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Well that was intense. Well written.
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Thank you… 2-word sentences can take no a life of their own..
my goal to get really good at making stories with them…
thank you Bradley.. your comments are always appreciated- K
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take “on” a life of their own.. oopsee!!
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Great Poem – or rather nightmare poem, well written… thankful we can wake up and be okay
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Thank you, chuckling here.
Perhaps we should call it
My fun with flash fiction!! 2-word- sentence style!😁😎😂
Love your comment!!
Kind Regards and chuckling – K
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Amazing! Well done!
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thank you so much!! I am diligently working to perfect the 2-word sentence story…
I figured why not? Perhaps I have been inspired by some individual who
brings out the best in people!! 🙂
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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