#MiracleChallenge #7: Week – 7
Challenge #2
A protective mist wrapped itself around me
As I attempted a noiseless tip toe step

Along a favorite back country road.
It was beyond the middle of the night.
The stars remained hidden beneath a prestorm
Grouping of an unseen ceiling of
An impenetrable coverage of dense clouds.
Not even the moon, had knowledge of how
To shine it’s way through the thick black mass.
In the direction of the path, I planned to take
A white formation materialized,
Literally, emerged ever so slowly.
Was it a hallucination?
Or perhaps a foggy dream,
As I was asleep in my comfy bed?
It’s eerie glow forged and replaced the blackness.

The form took on female resemblance
Somehow I recognized the visitor, as I watched,
A realization tinge that contained no fear
Engulfed my mind and encompassed my soul .
I recognized the resemblance to my mom
Who had passed over 30 years ago.
Stopped in the center of the dirt road
I pondered the timeliness of this visit.
It’s ghostly apparition like presence
Brought forth forgotten flashed
Memories of previous moments similar.
I recalled it’s manifestations prior,
That had veered me off preset
Destinations of journeys in the past.
By doing so, I had changed my course
And the change had saved me from harm.
At that moment, I understood,
She was there to protect me.
Her appearance was timed
To change my current country stroll
Which would undeniably avert me
From something evil or injurious.
To the left appeared another option
An unknown back route to home.
It became visible amidst
The overhang of arch formed tree limbs
It beckoned me with some
Unknown nurture inspired source.
Created a welcoming dim glow
Which illuminated this unexplored path.
I accepted the unspoken invitation
And scurried along the new gateway.
Somehow I knew it would take me home.
As I moved rapidly along, behind me
The path dispersed and was no more.
Later as I laid in my bed, encompassed
By my bed’s soft billowed comforter,
I knew she had once again protected me.
My mind felt peaceful and comforted
With the remembered knowledge
That I hadn’t nor would ever travel,
through life, unprotected or alone.
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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Aww K. This is so lovely. I loved it. Poem in form of Story. I enjoyed reading it. I loved your photographs too. They do tell your story.
Yes ! As you said, this is apt for challenge No 2 as well as No.4. Still, I consider this for No.2 as mentioned above. Congrats for completing challenge No.2. I will Reblog tomorrow.
Thank you for coming back 😀
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Thank you! I’m trying to write write more and your challenges give me the perfect opportunity to do so!! 😁
Hugs!
Kind regards and always learning – K
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I’m happy to hear that. Yes ! Learning is a long term process. I’m also into it.
Hugs to you 😀
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Reblogged this on miraclegirlblog and commented:
Hello Everyone !
Check out the latest post for ‘Weekly Writing Miracle Challenge’ Week – 7: https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/26/miraclechallenge-week-7-dated-26th-july-1st-august-2016/
Blogger : The Black Wall Blog (K)
Poem Title : She’s Always There
Challenge No : 2
Challenge : Write a Poem using below two prompt words –
* HALLUCINATION
* MIST
For those who are new to #MiracleChallenge, every Tuesday morning, I post new Writing prompts for 5 challenges to write Short Story / Tiny Tale/ Poem / Haiku.
Visit my blog to know the latest writing prompts and the rules to participate in #MiracleChallenge for the week dated from 26th July to 1st August, 2016.
Yes ! 1st August is the deadline.
To read participant’s submissions for Miracle Challenges, Click Here.
Kindly, everyone read and inspire each other to write.
Happy Blogging !
Enjoy and have fun:)
From,
Miracle:)
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Always a fun challenge!! keeps me on my toes and allows me to try new and different things..
Kind Regards and loving it!! – K
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I walked with you through your writing and it feels warm to read. Lovely.
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Jackie you always find a way to literally make my day…
Your words make my heart smile.
It similar to the way I feel when I visit your posts… your blog always emanates warmth and love!
Thank you so much!!
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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Thank you for these heartwarming words 🙂
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You deserve… the kindest words…
smiles 🙂
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Hi,
I know Jacqueline. Your poem is eerie , but your pictures are pretty.
Congratulations on being Danny’s featured blogger! I was his featured blogger too.Maybe you can check out my site If you need a blogging tip or two. That’s when I write about.
Janice
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I would love to!! 😁😁😁
I didn’t know I was Danny’s featured blogger! My cup runner over!
Poems can be eerie..
I am super excited you stopped by!! Always learning and I’ve only just begun!!
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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Hi K,
I help new bloggers at my site. I will look forward to it.
Janice
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Happy dancing! 😎
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Hi K,
I am sorry I don’t know how to respond. I have never heard that expression. The sun is cute.
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It means I’m feeling especially joyful!!. And yes I remember!!
I apologize I’m generally on early in the am.. very early! I just popped by and am on my tablet this afternoon.
Kind regards – K
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Thank you for explaining. I’m sorry I didn’t understand. Maybe I will use the expression now and you can be an influence on me, LOL.
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A win win for both.
I love teamwork!!
Kind Regards and sunshine abounds – K
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Me too! I have actually written many times about blogger collaboration. I even have a blogger collaboration group.
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I just popped into your blog and signed up. It looks like a wonderfully thought out grouping!! I am truly glad we have connected!
☺
Kind Regards-K
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I would like to Annie’s featured blogger either in the late July or early August. I don’t remember.
Janice
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A poetic story. Quite lovely. Thank you for the follow.
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My pleasure.. Thank you so much for the feedback..
Comments always put make me do the happy dance and put that silly grin on my face!!
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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