The orange pinkish hue of the sun
Slowly descends, down the horizon wall
Falling beyond the edge of the earth
Where things disappear into unknown regions
After sunset our earth succumbs to darkness
And not until another cloudless morning
Does our life light reappear and grow
As the sun rises, the rays
Increasingly bright as they creep up
Earths distant grayish blue wall
Our souls blossom with freedom
As the darkenss relinquishes
It’s hold and once again
We are allowed to
continue upon our way.
#Miraclechallenge Challenge #6
4 . Write a Story/ Poem using Prompt Theme – AFTER SUNSET
Kind Regards and #WINNING – K
A positivity poem. Yes ! After every darkness, there will be light for sure ☺
I enjoyed your path traveled through darkness then with a hope of light re – visiting.
Thank you for giving us a meaningful poem this week too, using the prompt theme 😃
Congrats for completing challenge no. 4 👏😃👏😃👏😃
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You are most welcome…
Positive outcome is always the key!! 🙂
I am glad you enjoyed it… 🙂
Kind Regards and still winning – K
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Rightly said !
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🙂
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This is so beautiful, K! Your meter perfectly mirrors your meaning, dipping low and then ascending. Bravo!!
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Really? I mean really?? smiling…
I just flows out of me, often I haven’t a clue if it makes sense or not. lol
What I do know is that most of the time, but not always I like it to come full circle to a positive ending… 🙂
Thank you lady!! Your thoughts mean so much!!
Kind Regards – K
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Reblogged this on Success Inspirer's World and commented:
Depressions Path
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Beautiful poem!
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ahhh thank you so much…
Your comment means so much!!
Have a grand day!!
Kind Regards – K
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Hello Everyone !
Check out the latest post for ‘Weekly Writing Miracle Challenge’ Week – 6 : https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/19/miraclechallenge-week-6-dated-19th-25th-july-2016/
Blogger : The Black Wall Blog (K)
Poem Title : After Sunset
Challenge No : 4
Challenge : Write a Story/ Poem using Prompt Theme – AFTER SUNSET
For those who are new to #MiracleChallenge, every Tuesday morning, I post new Writing prompts for 5 challenges to write Short Story / Tiny Tale/ Poem / Haiku.
Visit my blog to know the latest writing prompts and the rules to participate in #MiracleChallenge for the week dated from 19th to 25th July, 2016. Yes ! 25th July is the deadline.
Kindly, everyone read and inspire each other to write.
Happy Blogging !
Enjoy and have fun:)
From,
Miracle:)
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Thank you for including me… I look forward to your weekly challenge..
woo hoo can hardly wait to start on this one…
Kind Regards and having fun – K
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I love the way you layered this poem – just lovely!
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comments like yours make me smile all the way to my soul..
Thank you so much for the compliment…
Have a wonderful day!!
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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My pleasure. I think it’s a wonderful poem 🙂
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Like this poem! I nominated you for the A Very Lovely Bog award.
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why thank you.. how sweet of you… 🙂
happy dancing all the way..
Kind Regards and feeling grateful K
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